adding some extra parts instead of repeative parts over and over again, i do quite like however how the bass is a less dominant feature as it sounds just right here, as it is commonly overused in a fair few songs.
the best thing to do would to look at other submissions and check out whats happening there and try to use their ideas in your songs, just get a feel for the style and balance between bass and treble, somthing that's often crucial for a good song, but i think its been done well here.
for improvement just make it less repetitive.
If you dont like this...
...Somethings wrong with you.
I may of said before, this is my favorite genre, and SP1R1T; you are my favorite artist.
i don't really think i can criticize this in any way, keep it up
When i got a message to listen to this um... masterpiece, i thought; oh it's that grease ball who hates my work again, but no, if you personally messaged me, that really shows something, anyway to the review...
To be honest i quite like trance myself, but this seems 'different' to what trance I've previously heard, plus i like the more separate parts in the song with base and the high pitch if you understand me. (that's treble isn't it?)
I'm not certain i can write anymore on this, but an excellent song indeed, personally i think you should be profiting of your work like this.
keep it up!
:) Thanks :P
I don't hate your work, I've never really listened I think..
Yeah, The High parts of a song is treble and lower is bass. Its the Chorus that you mean :P
Thanks for the review :)
Somthing different like this is nice to listen to once in a while, pretty damn good
(I can see our queen listening to this lol)
If you dont like this...somthing's wrong with you.
Nice beats man it's got some style, don't really have much to say really. sorry.
Pretty damn good...
The quick transitions and the bass line are both pure IMPACT.
It's good to listen to somthing different every now and then. deserverves 10
Thanks for the review on my song!
I liked best the transition of instruments for example: 1 min piano the next it has somthing else joining it.
although it is rather 'repititive' but im still giving ten.
You have a great skill ill tell you that, this is somthing people will listen to over and over...... Keep it up!
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