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i hate DBZ
i like the fact that DBZ popularity is plummeting, in my view this was a pointless video,
because everyone knows that DBZ is crap anyway, and there is no more sufficient
material in the flash for me(maybe others too) to write a review.
do something funny next time not some pointless thing...
Pointless ? I bet you are some faggot who enjoys sticks beating each other and says it original.
you have the tolerence of the pope
I'd probably make something like that myself if i knew how to use flash, being a DJ
(some of my work is on here, the rest is to embarrassing or doesn't exist) i can tell you this is a masterpiece, although try to improve the sound quality overall.
what team fortress is i don't know, but splicing (yes, that is a real word) all of those clips and collaborating them, is bloody hard work.
10/10 regardless of sound quality
I'm sorry, but what the fucking hell was that?!
No offense by the way (in all of my review i sincerely apologize), but i just sat for five minutes waiting for it to load, OK I'm an impatient person, ill admit I'm pure shit when it comes to flash animating, but most of the time i could not at all see what was going on.
The reason I'm crap at flash is my art, i could of drawn that with a bit of difficulty, and if i was making something that big, i would f made it interesting, not some guy sucking his dick, i mean come on; whats the point?
The other thing, sound quality was well; appalling I'm a DJ, i should know; (some of my work is on NG) a decent microphone is something you obviously do not have, at least i would say, if your lucky you could pick one up for about 25 pounds. (or 50 us dollars)
I can't say any more, as i could only bare to watch 1 minute of this 15mb pile of bull&%#$ sorry for the offense, but i made better pieces of music reading offensive reviews, and really some one needs to tell you authors what you've done wrong with it, maybe you might go on my path and remove it from NG, like i did with most of my crap music.
Better luck next time...
nice game
the game is pretty good but it lacked any storyline, making the game a shooter where you just kill stuff but thats what you just want to do somtimes
nice game...
to kill the guy at the beach, get everyone off and blow his leg off, on the old man just shoot the tree great game btw do another!
not perfect...
It is OK for messing around with, the software i use for making music probably has less samples that come with the software than this, an upload tool would be immensely helpful, but i noticed you tried that.
I can't really write much more, but maybe dressing it up a bit (graphics and all that)
could really help, a tool witch when the pointer is over something, a box comes up that says what it is. (if you don't understand, hover your mouse over the address bar or the voting icons)
On a baseline, this only needs to be dressed up, access to even more samples, a range of effects, (compressors, pass filters, limiters etc) and the small but make all the difference features. (like the hover tool for instance)
I will vote 4, this has great potential.
Things taken note of :
Mouse hovering
Graphics. Il try uprgrading graphics relly high up on the next one.
Sounds...I dno... The codes came in a pac from flashkit but il try to get some of my own.
repetitive
adding some extra parts instead of repeative parts over and over again, i do quite like however how the bass is a less dominant feature as it sounds just right here, as it is commonly overused in a fair few songs.
the best thing to do would to look at other submissions and check out whats happening there and try to use their ideas in your songs, just get a feel for the style and balance between bass and treble, somthing that's often crucial for a good song, but i think its been done well here.
for improvement just make it less repetitive.
If you dont like this...
...Somethings wrong with you.
I may of said before, this is my favorite genre, and SP1R1T; you are my favorite artist.
i don't really think i can criticize this in any way, keep it up
:D Thanks
interesting...
When i got a message to listen to this um... masterpiece, i thought; oh it's that grease ball who hates my work again, but no, if you personally messaged me, that really shows something, anyway to the review...
To be honest i quite like trance myself, but this seems 'different' to what trance I've previously heard, plus i like the more separate parts in the song with base and the high pitch if you understand me. (that's treble isn't it?)
I'm not certain i can write anymore on this, but an excellent song indeed, personally i think you should be profiting of your work like this.
keep it up!
:) Thanks :P
I don't hate your work, I've never really listened I think..
Yeah, The High parts of a song is treble and lower is bass. Its the Chorus that you mean :P
Thanks for the review :)
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